Ollie's First Book - Welcome to the World
- davidgreendarkfict
- 7 days ago
- 1 min read
A lot of you probably have heard of my boss, Ollie (aged 8). Well, Ollie is looking to follow in his dad's footsteps and write books... and here's his first one!
You can download it (for free!) or read in browser here: https://dl.bookfunnel.com/mrwzv4wc5w
Please let Ollie know what you think in the comments below - he worked hard on Welcome to the World, and it's all him. I just did a quick spellcheck and made the cover for him.
Enjoy 'Welcome to the World' and congrats Ollie on your first publication!
Wow Ollie. The adventure is wonderful. Chris and Jaden are very brave. I live the fact they brought snacks. Smart young men planning for their adventure. Will we find out more about their world?
I loved the bravery of the boys in going on such an adventure! I really enjoyed imagining them in the luggage in the hold with the pets, bumping around. Fantastic work, Ollie.
Nice work, Ollie. Great dialogue between the brothers. Loved the part where they were stuck in the luggage together ❤️
Great job Ollie. I love the descriptive words and dialogue. Bring on Book 2! Want to see what other adventures the brothers get up to.
This story was awesome. I loved finding out what happened to the boys. I loved that they got to take a journey and how descriptive the writing was around the journey. I felt like I was with them going through all the bumps when they were in the luggage. Now I want there to be a sequel, their journey back home.